Today in class, my classmate, Zong Rui shared with us his plot for the composition. The plot was about a boy was timid and became brave after the incident. Zong Rui said that the boy fought with the robbers. I feel that it is not realistic. A young boy could not fight with two dangerous robbers.
After today's english lesson,I decided to change part of my plot. I found many loop holes in my plot. I hope my plot will turn out well.
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